Kia ora! This is one of my Summer Learning Journey tasks. For this task I had to write a chorus about success and stuff. My song is called 'We will strive' I hope you enjoy! and please don't laugh if I sound cringey. Enjoy! :D
It’s Charlotte again, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought the work you have done on the ‘Rise Up’ task was so awesome!
I think that song writing is such an amazing talent! The kids from Mangere College did such a great job making this song. What did you think of this song?
I noticed that you talked about never giving up in your song. Can you remember any times where something was hard but you didn’t give up? I think that it is very important to keep going even when things are hard!
Thank you for commenting on my blog! I am really glad that you liked my song. While I was thinking about this song I was thinking about what I do. I knew that I never give up so I thought others shouldn't to.
At the start of this year everyone in my class wrote a hope letter. We printed them out and put them on our class wall. My hope was that at the end of this year I would hopefully receive a first academic award at prize giving. I was working really hard and I didn't give up, and because of that I came first equal! I hope you like my little story!
Hi Juli, You song was great! The lines sounded perfect with each other, and it makes even more sense because you chose to put our school motto in there too! Great song and amazing rhyming. From Kiarah
Kia Ora Julianna,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte again, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought the work you have done on the ‘Rise Up’ task was so awesome!
I think that song writing is such an amazing talent! The kids from Mangere College did such a great job making this song. What did you think of this song?
I noticed that you talked about never giving up in your song. Can you remember any times where something was hard but you didn’t give up? I think that it is very important to keep going even when things are hard!
NgΔ mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Hi Charlotte!
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog! I am really glad that you liked my song. While I was thinking about this song I was thinking about what I do. I knew that I never give up so I thought others shouldn't to.
At the start of this year everyone in my class wrote a hope letter. We printed them out and put them on our class wall. My hope was that at the end of this year I would hopefully receive a first academic award at prize giving. I was working really hard and I didn't give up, and because of that I came first equal! I hope you like my little story!
From Julianna
Hi Juli,
ReplyDeleteYou song was great! The lines sounded perfect with each other, and it makes even more sense because you chose to put our school motto in there too! Great song and amazing rhyming.
From Kiarah
Hi Kiarah!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. I'm glad you liked my song. You also realised that i used the school motto!
From Julianna