The real story of Goldilocks and the Three Bears

This is my writing task. I had to create my own version of either Goldilocks and the three bears or peter piper. I chose Goldilocks and the three bears. I hope you enjoy my story of Goldilocks and the three                                                                                       chefs.

Once upon a time there lived three secretive chefs. Robert, Tom and Lilly. They all lived together in a secret restaurant in the woods. One day they made tons of delicious food for their customers. If you're wondering who or what these costumes are they are animals that live in the woods! All of the food they made was placed on a huge table. On the table there were berries, pies, cookies, cake, chicken, salad and lots more. The food was still quite hot so Robert, Tom and Lilly decided to go for a little walk around the woods so off they went.

after the chefs left a little girl called Goldilocks appeared. She was wandering around the woods. She was so hungry and bored. All of a sudden she stopped in shock of what she saw right in front of her. It was a restaurant. She ran inside and quickly looked for food. She was like a wild animal. Then she spotted the huge table. Her eyes sparkled in excitement. She ran around the table trying to look for one food. After a while she found her favourite food... Porridge! It was in 3 bowls. She tried the first bowl of porridge. She gulped it all down in one go. “it’s so cold!” she cried. She tried the next bowl. As Soon as she almost finished the porridge she spat it out on the floor. “My mouth is on fire!” She screamed. She was like a dragon. She burnt the wall with her fire breath. After a while her mouth cooled down. She tried the last bowl of porridge. “YUMMY!” she exclaimed.

She was getting tired so she went to the chef's room. There were three beds. She tried the first one. “This bed is too bouncy!” she said. She tested the next one. “ too sticky!” she said. She tested the last bed. “This is just right!” She fell into a deep sleep.

The Chefs finally came back from their walk. They went to the kitchen to see if the food was ready. They found food everywhere. The wall was burnt and some food was eaten. They followed a trail of porridge. That was when they found Goldilocks. They woke her up and told her off. Goldilocks was expecting to get kicked out but instead she got to stay with the chefs and they cooked food for her and they all lived happily ever after. The End