Friday, 18 August 2017

my planet

My what if planet!

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Write a paragraph describing your what if planet. Use adjectives to make your description detailed.

Once upon a time there was a dwarf planet. It was never seen by a human but seven years ago the planet started to move so much that a tiny candy floss poppet out of nowhere then suddenly it became bigger and bigger and bigger! That it exploded. Then it became a candy land! But when it exploded there were so much popcorn clouds. In two days ago it rained out so much candy that turned into a candy floss buffy ground.  But one day there were two little kids but they were gingerbread kids from two lollipop trees that they ate it all up that they had nowhere to sleep and play. Then the clouds became angrier then it started to rain out candy that it made candy houses so the little kids had their own house but one day the little gingerbread kids shouted their names out one was called Julianna and the other gingerbread kid name was Kharizma suddenly a   alien came out from the dark side. The alien threw a giant lollipop kharizma julianna was distracted by the lollipop the alien thew a frisbee bomb before it hit Julianna and Kharizma. A dog called flash jumped and catched the frizbee bomb and threw it away and saved Julianna and Kharizma.

1 comment:

  1. hi Julianna I love all the detail in your picture and I love that you called your planet a dwarf planet.your trees are very cool. I like that they are lolliepops.