I am a Year 6 learner in Room 8 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss Parrant.
Friday, 31 May 2019
Narrative
Once upon a time there lived a man called Tenit and a dog called Milo. On a nice sunny day at Sandy beach Tenit went to go surfing with his dog Milo. Milo did not want to go surfing so Tenit left Milo on the beach so he can surf by himself. Milo was just watching him surf.
A few minutes later suddenly Milo heard a huge SPLASH!! It was Tenit he fell off the surfboard Tenit was yelling for help.
Milo jumped into action and borrowed a small surfboard and surfed to Tenit as fast as he could.
Once he reached him he dived into the water. as he was trying to get closer to Tenit the waves were splashing onto his face Milo used his teeth to get grip on his T shirt and swam back to the surface.
Milo dragged him onto the sand and started jumping on his chest to try get him to wake up.
Finally Tenit started to move he opened his eyes and got up. When Tinit saw that Milo saved him he paused in amazement. Tenit was so thankful and surprised about Milo. From now on tenit Called Milo the dog lifeguard.
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