I am a Year 6 learner in Room 8 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss Parrant.
Thursday, 28 February 2019
Wednesday, 27 February 2019
Fix the mistakes
Miss West told us to fix the mistakes in these sentences.
FIX THE MISTAKES!
WALT: use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.
The writing below has some missing full stops and capital letters! Can you find the mistakes?
In December last year I went on a trip to Western Australia. It was the first time I had been there since I was two years old. While I was there I had many adventures and saw a lot of wildlife. I saw lizards, a range of birds, frogs, kangaroo, snakes, fish, quokka and stingray.
One of the highlights of my trip was when I climbed 61 metres up a tree to a fire lookout. There was an amazing view from the top. I could see right over the treetops and into the distance. Treetop lookouts like this one were once used to keep an eye out for bushfires.
It was 44 degrees celsius on the day I left Perth and there was a big bushfire which had started a couple of hours down the road. As a result there were thunderstorms rumbling around the city. In the plane we flew near a thunderstorm which was absolutely amazing.
After sitting on the plane for six and a half hours the plane landed in Auckland. We were told it was 21 degrees. This was 23 degrees colder than in Perth. I was cold.
FIX THE MISTAKES!
WALT: use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.
The writing below has some missing full stops and capital letters! Can you find the mistakes?
In December last year I went on a trip to Western Australia. It was the first time I had been there since I was two years old. While I was there I had many adventures and saw a lot of wildlife. I saw lizards, a range of birds, frogs, kangaroo, snakes, fish, quokka and stingray.
One of the highlights of my trip was when I climbed 61 metres up a tree to a fire lookout. There was an amazing view from the top. I could see right over the treetops and into the distance. Treetop lookouts like this one were once used to keep an eye out for bushfires.
It was 44 degrees celsius on the day I left Perth and there was a big bushfire which had started a couple of hours down the road. As a result there were thunderstorms rumbling around the city. In the plane we flew near a thunderstorm which was absolutely amazing.
After sitting on the plane for six and a half hours the plane landed in Auckland. We were told it was 21 degrees. This was 23 degrees colder than in Perth. I was cold.
My trip to Niue
Once we arrived to Niue we went to my grandma's old house. Then we unpacked everything. Then I went to play with my cousins. Next I sat down because we were running around and I got tired. I saw my brother helping my grandpa find crabs in coconuts. I heard that my brother found three crabs for grandpa so I wanted to help so I can find more than Kris (my brother). I went to help but I couldn't find anything. Then my brother screamed because he felt something hit his cheek. Suddenly I felt a sting on my neck, my brother and I were so terrified we both started sprinting back to our mum. While I was running I tried to flick the wasp off my neck. Finally I flicked the wasp off but it wasn't over. When I flicked it off it grabbed onto my finger and stung my finger. I tried flicking it off again. Finally I flicked it away and stopped running when I got up to my mum. My experience was great it was so fun there but my less favourite part was when I got stung by a wasp twice on the first day at Niue.
Friday, 22 February 2019
Narritive
Ted and Ned owned their own bakery. They cooked the food in there. One fine afternoon, a postman came knocking on the door. Ted went to open the door. The postman gave Ted a letter and left. Ned came to the front door and said to Ted, “What does the letter say?” Ted said, “It says:
Ted wanted to bake a cake and pumpkin soup but Ned thought a pig and shrimp would be nice. Ted and Ned started fighting. “Cake and pumpkin soup!” “No! Pig and shrimp.” Then someone entered the bakery. Ted said “sorry but the bakery is not open today.” “Hi my name is Tony I heard you two fighting. You should make both!” Ted and Ned thought that was a great idea. Ted went to make cake and pumpkin soup and Ned went to make pig and shrimp. When the food was done they put it in the fridge. Then Ted and Ned were going to say thank you to Tony but he wasn't anywhere. “He must have left while we were cooking, Ned.” It was the next day. “Time for the feast!” Ted shouted. Ted and Ned took the food and brought it to the mansion. The prime minister and her family was ready to taste the food. They started to take a bit of the food. Then the prime minister said “Well done, you did a good job!”
Friday, 15 February 2019
Friday, 8 February 2019
Thursday, 7 February 2019
About me
Fakalofa Lahi atu. My name is Julianna. I am in year 5, my teacher is Miss West. I enjoy drawing because I like being creative. My favourite thing to draw are animals.My favourite colour is pink. I like playing netball and I also like watching Netflix in the weekend. I am full Niuean. I have a dog and his name is Milo, (interesting fact) his birthday is on Waitangi day.
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