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Thursday 9 January 2020

SLJ week 1 activity 3 day 3: Achieving our dreams

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  1. Great aspiration for the future Julianna - remember you need to be 13 to have you own chanel so you have plenty of planning time ahead of you! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!

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  2. Hi Mrs Collins,
    Thank you for the tip and thank you for commenting on my blog.
    from Julianna

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  3. TΔ“nā koe Julianna,

    The post you’ve made to show how you’d help your brother become a youtuber is fantastic! The poster is clear and informative, and I love how you’ve added an image of your brother - this makes your post more personal :) I like the things you’ve said about how you’d help him, especially the one about writing ideas for the channel - it shows you are a caring and supportive sibling and I can tell you’ve put a lot of thought and effort into this post. Ka pai!

    What would you like to do as a job when you’re older and how could your brother help you achieve this?

    Ka pai on making a great post and enjoy the rest of your summer,
    Eliza :)

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